Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Alone, I find myself in a waking dream
Looking out from the inside it seems
A prisoner of my heart, inside I sleep
Mourning the loss of a friend I weep
It happened long ago in death he was taken
Since that time I am unable to awaken
Feels like forever I have been in this state
Closing my eyes laden with tears in darkness I wait
My sentence I have served many years
When all at once a whisper came to my ears
Speaking in words so soft and pure
He told me of all things that endure
Smiling I feel a stirring in my heart
It's like his words give light to the dark
Opening my heart with the new found key
Forever granting my soul amnesty
Hope this dream stays with me now
Forever.................

26 comments:

Jeya Anand said...

we gotto keep on flying like birds leaving behind the sorrow , despair , gloom ... written gud...

Anonymous said...

beautifully written......

Neo said...

beautiful flow of words...i loved it...keep going!!

Rajeev said...

"opening my heart with the new found key"
my fav line of all! :)
lovely poem!!

peace & love
JeeVY

Dawn....सेहर said...

Nice expressions through simple words
Keep writing
Cheers

Ashok - Chennai's Own Thrill Hunter said...

Nice and Well-Composed

Aditi said...

thanx payal,, u liked my blog..

urs is also a very nice one.. the words used are very proper and are used in a beautiful way..

soul&body said...

yape. simple expressions and fly in the emotion from whom read them

Sharad Mathur said...
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priya said...

Nice one payal. New is something always happens when you can open your heart and lok at the happiness.

ashish soni said...

hey budy
nice one

All Smiles!! said...

Beautiful post Payal :)

Shruti said...

hmm, very interesting and lovely...
Love the words, so simply written yet powerful..
Take care...

pradiip said...

Hmmm mere toh samajh se pare hi likhti hai..

Mystic Rose said...

i hope so too.. keep the beautiful memories, but you also need to elt go and be a whole person yourself.. :)

take care. hugs!

Neo said...

interesting...the words leave an impact...gud work!!!

krystyna said...

Hi Payal!
Very moving poem. Life is full of good and sad experience.
Peace and Love be with you!
Have a nice Sunday!

Aditi said...

hi, how r u?

I liked these lines and hope the same for you...
Hope this dream stays with me now
Forever...
:)

INDR's Angels said...

so far commenting s futile.
u must have been burnt out with praises in variad written forms.
well, this is a really touching and beatifully rendered piece from the heart, for the soul.
cheers !

cosmic clown said...

hey Payal very touching indeed....I too hope it stays forever.......:)

Sharad Mathur said...

well said

sharad

Pankaj Gupta said...

hi Payal..that was really Awesome--i can stay ALONE now aftr readng that..good one.thnx for sharing...

Shruti said...

Hi payal, How you have been..

Long time, no updates..
Take care of urself..

Maddy said...

man - that is pretty deep...from somebody your age...

mystic rose said...

payal,
how are you? take care.

krystyna said...

Hi Payal!
Hope you are doing well.
Have a wonderful Sunday!