Tuesday, June 5, 2007

A thunderous silence
breaks through my thoughts.
What was once many great ideas
is now a triumph, lost.
Like, I am loser !

Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness beckons to me,
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay there forever?
To be lost in all my cares?
From the inside, looking out -
Sometimes, I cry silent tears.

20 comments:

ss said...

sometimes it's so peaceful to get lost... shed all inhibitions and admit to yourself that the battle is over and you have lost it...and then there starts a new beginning... tc

krystyna said...

Hi Payal!
Amen- what Simon said.

Have a great day!

Sharad Mathur said...

what happened to u now??
why so depressed?
i hope its just a poem.

nicely put though :)
sharad

Anonymous said...

Hii!

Nice poem Payal!!
hope you r doing well!
Thanks for visiting!

Jeya Anand said...

I can sense it..very well...

Neo said...

I guess depression is getting the best of everyone. Now what's your story?

mystic rose said...

inside myself, i take cover.
sometimes, i cry silent tears....

and you heal.

Rajeev said...

nice poem!
how've u been doin'?!

peace & love
Jeevy

Pankaj Gupta said...

wow thts nice..

Nanditha Prabhu said...

everyone, passes thro this phase, i guess!
nice poem!

naren_buddy said...

urrent state of mind..bfully captured...gr8

Beefybob7 said...

From one loser to another - HELLO PAYAL.

Maddy said...

something troubling you? seems so..

Shruti said...

Hi payal,
Sometimes it is better to be alone, but its not that you feel isolated..
Its good to refresh yourself..

Take care

soul&body said...

hello!!!!
im back!!
thank you for your comment ;)

soul&body said...

you are not a loser
Sometimes we do wrong things but doesnt mean that we are a loser!!!
and when you are down and need to cry, CRY, cry because it aliviate our soul!
Hope you are ok.
a big hug

Payal said...

Yup SS u are right .. sometimes its so peaceful to get lost..where nobody can see you.
Krys .. Amen :)

Hey shamu.. so u are back :)
Sharad m not depressed.. its just a voice in my head. :)

Hey shamu.. so u are back :)

Neo, will tel you that story soon.

Mystic howz u doing ?

Hello Rajeev ji :)

Beefy of course u are not a loser.
Well i can accept the hello :)

Nopes Mady. No trouble. No hustle.
That's life and its just a thought.

Welcome back soul thanks for catch up.

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