Saturday, February 10, 2007

Harsh words & violent blows
Hidden secrets nobody knows
Eyes are open, hands are fisted

Deep inside I'm warped & twisted
So many tricks & so many lies
Too many whens & too many whys
Nobody's special, nobody's gifted
I'm just me, warped & twisted
Sleeping awake & choking on a dream

Listening loudly to a silent scream
Call my mind, the number's unlisted

Lost in someone so warped & twisted
On my knees, alive but dead
look at the invisible blood I've bled
I'm not gone, my mind has drifted

Don't expect much, I'm warped & twisted
Burnt out, wasted, empty, & hollow
Today's just yesterday's tomorrow
The sun died out, the ashes sifted
I'm still here, warped & twisted

9 comments:

Ajay said...

dats a cool piece of writing
"wraped n twisted" hunh ?

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aaron said...

I was just wondering who wrote this poem. My friend claimed she wrote this and just pulled it from thin air but I highly doubt it since I found many sites containing this poem. Can you just tell me who wrote this poem?

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shane steinz said...

This might be considered good work had you actually written it. You
all might want to look the first stanza up on google before giving
this clown adulation as its actually been copywrited by someone else.
Not only that but this is a very shortened (botched to shyte) version.any would like to see the authors finished unedited peice can email me at life_is_poetik@yahoo.com once you read the finished (copywrited peice) you will see just how badly botched this is. And to give you the back drop on this poem. Thos version was the first rough draft posted to the authors site in 1999. He wrote it when he was 15 and in 1999 when internet first became popular uploaded it to a blog site and from there everyone and there mothers brother (including this clown) has taken credit for writing it lol. Now again if anyone wants to see a copy of the actual finished (copywrited) work please email me and you will see a major difference.. P.S SHAME ON ALL YOU FAKES TAKING CREDIT FOR SOMETHING THAT ISN'T YOURS TO TAKE CREDIT FOR